
Wea’ve Written Weekly
Here’s a last minute response to the most recent W3 prompt. This week’s Poet of the Week is David benAlexander and David’s prompt guidelines are to “Write a poem from the perspective of an inanimate household object, using personification.“ (Go to The Skeptic’s Kaddish to find out more)
Well Tempered by D. Avery I am the meter of your measured days moon faced within my quarters weight of time on my rounded shoulders you look to me when you check your plans you look to me for a sense of order Often you glance upon my face what you see affects your pace I cannot move, I run in place I remain still up on the wall except for when, in spring and fall you take me down, you stroke my hands then put me back, reinstalled Inanimate, yes, but with moving parts I make my rounds but never depart when the house is still, I’m its beating heart I’m analog, a relic sublime a cosmic model for keeping time always turning, rain or shine I am the measure of your metered days
How well you wrote this. It is lovely and isn’t it the truth: it is the beating heart with us till the end. I love your words. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much.
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This is beautiful❤️
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Thank you.
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Very well articulated, very beautiful. ” Measure of your metered days.”
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Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
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You chose an excellent object. We take so many things for granted these days. It is easy to forget how important the measurement of time is to humanity.
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I wonder how many of us have an analog clock in the house anymore? The coffee pots, microwaves, phones all provide a digital read out of the time. But I prefer the moonfaced two handed clock.
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I have one 🙂 It is so much nicer to look at than a digital one.
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👍🏼
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Beautiful poetry 💖
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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GORGEOUS 😍
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I love the way that you haven’t mentioned clock. I can hear the tick tock…
Beautiful ❤️
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Yeah, I was kind of in #39 mode, when we wrote riddles.
Thank you, Glad you liked it.
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Perfect! For better or worse, the clock defines our lives. (K)
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It does and so I prefer the old round analog clock.
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I don’t wear a watch anymore, but I never liked the digital ones.
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Glad you managed this late response it’s beautifully written 💕
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Beautiful write, D! I love my analog clock.
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Thanks!
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Excellent choice D.
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Thanks!
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hi, Deanna ❤
I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by the amazing Michelle Ayon Navajas, is now live:
Enjoy! 🙂
Sincerely,
David
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