
Wea’ve Written Weekly
The W3 prompt this week, brought to us by the current Poet of the Week, Brandon Ellrich is to compose a riddle or “puzzle” poem. Brandon says: “There are no restrictions on length or rhyme. You can give the answer at the end of your poem, or to make it a little more fun, allow readers to try to guess the answer. You can also provide the answer within your poem. Have fun!” Go to The Skeptic’s Kaddish to link up and to read the other poets’ work.
Ode To My __________ by D. Avery a friendship forged with you contained but if you run wild nothing remains you are hard to handle, hard to hold you demand that I feed you, show you some care and give you your space, give you some air I know if you go out, I’ll be left cold you cannot be smothered, if you’re to last yet I must damp you so you don’t go too fast I keep you in your place, keep you controlled so I tend you and you bring warmth to cold nights in winter’s darkness you are a bright burning light a friendship forged, we’re both consoled
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A fireplace?
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Wow, no one can hold a candle to you! Yes, or I suppose specifically, the fire within the woodstove. We’ve been together with highs and lows since the end of October.
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My first instinct was fire🔥 I wasn’t sure in what context. This riddle poem was fun to guess. The weather has been wild 22-23. Mother Earth isn’t cooking on simmer these days.
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Celsius? That is wild, in Fahrenheit mild for this time of year at 44.44 degrees north. I’m glad you had fun with my rhyming riddle.
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Oh… no. I meant 2022-2023. It’s been mad all over the world.
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Ha! Guess my mind isn’t on time.
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Wow, Tanmay – you’re awesome at this.
❤
David
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Love?
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Well, I love having it, but… no.
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Oh geezzz…this is hard🙈🙈
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Did I burn you with this one?
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So it’s fire?
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It’s perfect Clear now. But was cleverly written.
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Clarity is a murky thing.
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Haha!
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Yep, the fire I keep in my wood stove through the winter.
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🔥🔥🔥
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I thought of a cat at first, lol (feeding, giving space, keeping warm), until the dampening part. Very good riddle!
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My cat lies right in front of the woodstove and loves to watch the flames through the glass door. Thank you for the prompt!
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Sounds as though you and your imagination have a sound contract. ❤
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Oh, that it were my imagination, all fired up and nowhere to go.
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Mine is always frustrated by everyday interruptions. Your words fit perfectly for a description of my own. Wonderful post!
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Try to keep it stoked.
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D. ❤ ~ this is such a lovely and clever one! Just the right amount of hints!
~David
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Thanks!
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Deanna,
Just FYI: this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Jaideep Khanduja, is now live:
Enjoy! ❤
~David
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I was srumped! Well done. (K)
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I knew it was fire! 🔥😁
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That was definitely clever. Why was I thinking Cat? Fire makes way more sense!
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The cat is always quite close to the fire here, so maybe you were picking up on that.
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Maybe. But once I knew it was fire, I was like.. d’oh! 😉
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That’s the way of riddles. So easy once you know.
It was an interesting prompt that got fun and varied results from the participants!
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True! 😀
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