
The January 16, 2023 story challenge from Charli Mills at Carrot Ranch is to: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a lady shadow. Who is this person and why do they lurk in the shadows. What is the tone and setting for your story? Go where the prompt leads!
I didn’t come up with a story for the prompt, no 99-word flash fiction piece. What I have instead is a Double Ennead, the 99-syllable poetry form invented for Carrot Ranch by Colleen Chesebro. There are three 5-lined stanzas, with 5, 6, 11, 5, 6 syllables each. It’s where the prompt led.
The Shadow Lady by D. Avery I didn’t see her. Only saw a raven, black wings whispering over fog filled valleys through winter gray sky, lustrous shadow in flight. Only the raven roosting high in the pine before dropping gracefully down to the snow to dig for her cache— she has been here before. Creation’s shadow, death and resurrection; guide and messenger, she is light’s reflection. Or, just a raven, scratching familiar ground.

Be sure to go to Carrot Ranch to read the complete “Rabbit” collection from last week. And there’s always the Ranch Yarns with Kid and Pal’s responses HERE.
This is so good.
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Thank you Sadje. I like this poetic form, the syllable count and stanzas provide just enough structure.
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Oh yes it does. Fits perfectly
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I love this D. But you know I have a thing for crows (and shadows, for that matter) (K)
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Better corvid than covid any day.
Thanks!
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Yes!
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Oh this is excellent, D. I write this form often. It just has a good rhythm and flow to it. 🙏🏻 🧡
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It’s a patently perfect poetic form!
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🥳 Perfect for all poets!
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I see ravens and crows in a positive way, and your poem spoke volumes to me. And what fun using a syllabic form.
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It’s a great form that Colleen came up with, people are raven about it.
Yep, those are some of my favorite birds, those corvids. I can hear the ravens over at my brother’s and my parents’ across the lake (Dad puts treats out for them, then they see what my brother’s chickens have to share) and then they fly over and hang out on the mountain. A great way to start a day.
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I throw treats on our patio for the big black birds. They stop by most every day.
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Very nice!
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Thank you!
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