
Wea’ve Written Weekly
The W3 prompt this week, brought to us by the current Poet of the Week, Denise DeVries, is: Using some type of computer aid, write the first line of a poem. Then, follow it with between two and 18 of your own lines. You may use one of the links below or another site you like. Tell us which tool you chose.
Fairly new to the W3 prompt, I’ve enjoyed the friendly baton passing for the prompt and the fresh and unique criteria for each week’s prompt. I tried the suggested sites above and did not like anything about them. It is not for me, and I thank Denise for pushing me to try something new. The tool I ended up using was spam. I took a subject line from a spam email and went from there. I don’t know if that counts, and I am not sure about the result, but I’ve written. Go to The Skeptic’s Kaddish to link up and to read the other poets’ work.
Degenerative by D. Avery
your window might be finalizing to prevent yourself from catastrophic influences
this is what they said and you don’t know them but this is what you read
and involuntarily you shuddered and instinctively you shuttered
to protect yourself, to prevent your finalizing windows from shattering
because somewhere sometime someone pushed a button
unlatched a lid and now something knocks and scratches to come in
they coax and coo, say they’re looking out for you
but their language is a metallic can ringed with toxic waste
a sticky paste of catastrophic influences searching, seeking
and you berate yourself for peeking through the decomposing curtain
but you just had to see if true art still grew
you knew the final door open to catastrophe would be fear and apathy.
Amazing. Such an interesting, odd beginning and you took the poem in interesting, odd directions.
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It was such an interesting prompt I almost walked away! My response was so odd I almost didn’t post. But I did. What is poetry anyway? Thank you for checking it out.
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It was fun. I love the way your mind works.
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🤓🧐🤪
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What a great use for spam! It always does sound like it was written by an alien. The language is definitely metallic. (K)
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Thank you. Yes, there is a certain syntax that doesn’t ring true.
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Yes, like it’s been translated several times from several other different languages…
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Excellent take D. I’m still in a quandary how to write on this prompt
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This is a tough one I think. Good luck with the generators!
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Thanks D.
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I really enjoyed this poem.
That way of generating prompts sounds interesting. I may give it a try some time.
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This was certainly new for me. I’m glad if you liked the result.
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Best use of spam ever! And while this is Denise’s prompt, so she gets to decide, I feel that this is not only legitimate but also great 👍🏻
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Glad you enjoyed the spam! This was an interesting writing exercise for sure.
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Yeah – it was way different than anything I normally write – a very interesting challenge from Denise 😀
BTW, this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Brandon Ellrich, is now live 🙂
Enjoy ❤
~David
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Now we know what to do with spam! 😁
I enjoyed this poem very much 🌹
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Yes, might as well put spam to some good use, it seems to be in endless supply.
Thank you, I’m glad you liked the poem and appreciate your saying so.
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I love the direction you took this one! And I think the spam comment line was a stroke of genius!
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Thanks!
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