PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
In Passing by D. Avery Maybe poverty is about living in a dirty place unkempt and some will say the poverty is in people not caring enough to put their trash in a barrel; to clean up, show some self-respect and few will say the poverty is in people not caring enough to share Earth's resources to look at the world as their own yard unfenced or they’ll say it in passing as they continue with their busy lives.

This is a second post in response to this week’s W3 prompt brought to us by the current Poet of the Week, Murisopsis. They would have us write about poverty in any poetic form, in exactly 14 lines. Go to The Skeptic’s Kaddish to link up and to read the other poets’ work. I worked with American Sentences or really, a run-on sentence with line breaks but yep, 17 syllables per stanza. At 74 words it fits that criteria for Friday Fictioneers , but as it is not fiction in story form I won’t link in there but do need to admit that the photo, by Roger Bultot, gave this poem a boost.
Yes those are all metaphorical variations of poverty
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I think the outward signs of poverty get held against the poor but we never want to look at root causes and our own complicity in the problem.
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Unfortunately and sadly, the truth is bitter.
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“A fair share of anything is starvation diet to an egomaniac.”
― Quentin Crisp, The Naked Civil Servant
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Hey Doug! Happy New Year!
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and to you, D. 🙂
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Dear Dee,
Too true. We’ve lost respect for others because we no longer respect ourselves. Nicely done. And it’s perfectly Kosher to link this with Friday Fictioneers. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle. I will join your lovely group but may be a while in catching up with all the reading.
Shalom.
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Another very thought provoking poem! Poverty of caring seems to be rampant!!
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Thank you.
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I’m with Rochelle, I do not see why you couldn’t link this up to FF. It is a wonderfully written observation.
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Thank you.
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A thought provoking poem D
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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So true D. We are too absorbed in ourselves. (K)
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So much truth in these words.
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Thank you.
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I agree with every line and word of this piece, D. ❤ ~ this is excellent and I love how you structured it!
~David
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Thanks, David. Not exactly an American sentence, but counting syllables reins me in and keeps me between the ditches.
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hi, D. ❤
The lovely Denise is hosting W3 this week ~ and she's come up with a unique prompt!
Enjoy 🙂
David
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In a few poetic phrases, you sum up a lot about attitudes toward poverty. Well done, D.
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Thanks!
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When we had nothing, in our hearts we had everything.
Now that we have everything, we have nothing but contempt.
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Cleverly done, D. An enjoyable read that calls out thought and reflection. 🙂
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Thank you Bill.
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You said so much in just a handful of words. I read it a couple of times to fully appreciate it. Nice one.
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Thanks!
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D. ❤
I just wanna share that this week's W3, hosted by the sweet, lovely Sarah David, is now live:
Enjoy!
~David
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