
Wea’ve Written Weekly
I am trying the W3 prompt again this week from The Skeptic’s Kaddish. The Poet of the Week, and therefore our prompter, is the host himself, Ben Alexander, who would have us write a series of at least five “atom” tercets on the theme of “children” or “childhood”. An atom has at least one tercet (three line stanza); 5-7-5 letters per line; no punctuation; no capitalization (like haiku). Counting letters instead of words or syllables made this a frustrating challenging form.
Dream Seeds by D. Avery child of woods knows trees whisper to her hears animals speak seeks her star dream seeds gathers to sow feeds on words grows sings becomes a bird soars returns knows
Beautiful
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome
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Excellent. Love it 😊
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Thank you. Counting letters seemed more restrictive than constructive, or maybe just another puzzle to work out. I appreciate the compliment.
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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for all that it was challenging, you gifted us with some truly beautiful imagery here, D. ❤
~David
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Thank you. It seemed like I couldn’t say what I wanted to, but then again I wasn’t sure what that was, so maybe the form forced the poem to say what it needed to. 🤔 😬
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That’s actually one of the things I most love about all forms – often, messages come out of them that I never expect!
❤
David
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You’ve captured the magic of childhood in your atom poem. I was enchanted.
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Thank you, I appreciate that. And magic is a five letter word.
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Beautiful ❤️🌹
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Thank you.
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Nice!
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Thanks! I’m grateful to have grown up under trees.
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😀
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This is lovely! Especially, the last one.
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Beautiful! I can picture this setting well!
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I’ve re read this poem because it transports me into the forest of childhood and fairies…
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Excellent! Loved the images evoked!
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Thanks!
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D., just wanna let you know that your W3 is now live:
Much love,
David
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Beautiful poem D. I Congratulations on being featured on David’s site. I enjoyed trying your prompt of writing a‘Tetractys’.
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
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