#99 Word Stories; “I see the light in you”

The October 17, 2022 story challenge from Charli Mills at Carrot Ranch is to: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that references “I see the light in you.” You can use the phrase or demonstrate it in a story. Who is shining and why? Who is observing or reacting? What is the setting? Go where the prompt leads! Submit by October 22, 2022.

An Encounter by D. Avery

She searched her reflection in the bathroom mirror, looked deep into her own eyes. She didn’t like what she saw. Still…

‘Aanii,’ the old woman had said. ‘I see the light in you.’ What a strange way to greet someone, someone you don’t even know.

“I don’t see it,” she said to her reflection, her sad eyes staring darkly back at her. But she couldn’t forget the twinkle in the old woman’s soft gaze.

She had seen a light in her.

That was something.

She put the pills back in the vial, put the vial back in the cabinet.

The last two Carrot Ranch Literary Community prompts, “tea”, then “water”, were great prompts and got great responses. See these collections of 99 word stories HERE and HERE.

14 thoughts on “#99 Word Stories; “I see the light in you”

  1. Great storytelling, D. What a turnaround. It proves why I always say ‘good morning’ to everyone when walking my dogs every morning. They may not all return a ‘good morning’ but my ‘good morning’ may have made a difference.

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  2. When we get to a low point – it is good to have some encouragement.
    Even from a source that maybe beyond our scope of understanding.
    I’m glad ‘she’ saw the light… and hope it grows so she too can share it.

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