
At long last and maybe too late, I have six sentences in response to this week’s Six Sentence Story prompt, “labyrinth”. The prompt word put me in mind of walking labyrinths and also of the art of the Tohono O’odham. While inspired by the Tohono O’odham’s ‘Man in the Maze’ the following is not meant to be a retelling of their I’itoi or U’ki’ut’l stories, but is more of a walking meditation to help straighten out my tangled serpentine thoughts.
Do go to our hostess’ site, GirlieontheEdge, and read others’ labyrinthian tales of six sentences each.
The Path by D. Avery
She appeared then, appeared as a mountain revealed when the mists lift, appeared as a pebble revealed in a palm when a fist opens, and she smiled then, knowingly, knew your unspoken words: I have lost my way.
Her gentle laughter was dappled sunlight and there in her hands was an endless rope, woven with each experience you’ve ever had, braided from your stories, and she held the rope, her hands wide apart, wide as the mountain, wide as the world, that you might see how long is your path.
She laughed again, said A straight path, however long, can never lead to the center, and she snapped the rope, and it fell before you in a labyrinthian coil and you again set upon your way as the mists again descended.
This path is long and winding, with abrupt turns seeming to thwart progress. But you can see where you have been and you gain patience with each step; acceptance replaces expectancy as you journey on.
Then a step takes you to a tree cloaked mountain, to where a tossed pebble leaves ripples in the center of a sun dappled lake, and you know that it is all yours, that it is you, that even the gentle laughter you hear is your own.
So beautifully written D. Loved it.
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Thank you Sadje. I’m just glad to be back with something.
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You’re welcome
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A lovely piece of writing.
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Thank you Robbie. I was happy to catch this one.
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This was utterly beautiful, Diana. I love it
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Thank you. It was a nice way to come out of a dry spell for me.
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Dry spells… much as we don’t enjoy them when we are in them, if, on the other side, it gives us this, then it was worth it!
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BRAVO, BRAVO!!! The opening is so lovely and pulled me in for the beauty of all the rest. I suspect your 6 will be my fave 🙂
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed this.
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You’re welcome–I truly did!
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Beautiful and poetic, a cool deep dip into higher plane. ❤
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Thanks! I like that, “a cool deep dip…”
That’s where this twisting prompt led.
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(C’mon in…the water’s fine!)
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It is, and that’s good to remember.
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A stunner. And what a way to finish ‘…. you know that it is all yours, that it is you, that even the gentle laughter you hear is your own.’
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This one almost didn’t get to the page, too busy etc again this week, but the sense of it steeped and finally it seeped out as is. That ending came as a pleasant surprise to me too.
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You wove a spell of your own with these words.
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Thank you.
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Your words are their own meditation. (K)
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🙏🏼
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Labyrinths make me long for the straight paths.
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We find ourselves at opposite ends
for I find straight paths lead round the bend.
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Wow! That totally deep and beautiful. It reminds me of philosophical books like The Prophet and I’m not sure which others just now. It’s beautiful.
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Thank you Norah. I’m relieved this worked its way out, and that it works. I’m sure it is a conglomeration of many things I’ve read over the years, Sufi stuff and indigenous Americans’ stuff.
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It works. 😊💖
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This has to… ( Shhh) …be…(Ssshhhh)…let me write, will ya?…(Shhh, Shhh, silence is all is needed in front of this.. Shhh).
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😌 🙏🏼
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What an engaging Six. While most of us hope to fashion stories that are engaging, it is usually if a singular quality, dynamic action, or intriguing dialogue being the most common.
Your Six engages (or, perhaps more appropriately offers opportunity to we Readers) on so many fronts; setting, dialogue, imagery, even (a) philosophy. And, as one Commenter (Mermadtwo) said, “Your words are your own mediation,”
Nice
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Thank you, Kind Sir, for your kind words.
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I love this, D.
Clearly sourced from another plane, we should all come out of a dry spell writing such as you have in this Six.
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Thank you. I’m sure glad this one showed up.
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