
A Six Sentence Story is a story told in exactly six sentences. It could also be a six lined or six stanza poem; it could be a soc, a bots, or creative non-fiction. This week’s prompt word, provided by our hostess Denise, at GirlieOntheEdge, is “rhythm“. I’m early this week, the link will open Wednesday at six pm, EST, so write now so you can link up your story then and join the fun crowd of Sixers.
A Strong, Regular, Repeated Pattern by D. Avery
Rodney Snoddergust, though a good sport, was not known for athleticism or coordination, in fact quite the opposite.
In basketball he stood out for his clumsy missteps and spectacular airballs and at season’s end when the court was transformed and decorated for that unfortunate school dance, his signature move was, all too literally, the anklebreaker.
He and his dance partner were both healed and ambulatory by baseball season, when Rodney stoically donned cleats and took up the bat for his team, but always he swung a beat too late, never occasioning to hear the gratifying ring of aluminum connecting with the ball, nor the satisfying slap of a ball in the pocket of his mitt.
But his school also fielded a spelling bee team and it was here that Rodney excelled; in this arena Rodney was the cleanup hitter assuring his team of victory; here he confidently stamped out the letters of the most obscure words linguistics had to offer in a metronomic voice that never faltered throughout the finals, for here Rodney was in the zone.
There was only one word that rattled this spelling prodigy, and suddenly the pronouncer lobbed it, that vexing six letter word that seemed strangled and constricted by its plethora of consonants, but Rodney took a deep vowelly breath and stepped up to the microphone.
“Rhythm; r-y-t-h-y-m; rhythm.”
Train-crashingly poignant, D. Loved ‘Rodney took a deep vowelly breath’.
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I always misspell that word. r-h, rheally? There’s a paucity of vowels in it and syllabication is arhythmic. Rhodney was set up.
I think you must be a better man than I, in fact I’m sure of it, for I thought this was funny, not poignant, though comedy and tragedy are close kin I suppose. Either way, thanks!
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Definitely funny. 🙂
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Guys with no ‘rythym’ still gotta dance! Poor Rodney.
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He tried! Poor Rodney does try.
Thanks for dropping by!
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Everyone has that one special talent. Great story.
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Thanks! It was fun tew wright.
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My daughter still talks about a class where the teacher asked what teams the students were on–(she was on the softball team) and one student answered “the debate team”. And why not? (K)
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I love that. Why not indeed. And debate is a lifelong sport with no costly infrastructure required.
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I can’t spell rhythm either. I like how his signature move was the ankle breaker.
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It’s a tough word. Rhythm, that is. Apparently anklebreaker is a move in basketball.
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Close, but no banana. He seems like the kind who won’t give up, though.
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I believe you’re right about him not giving up. Still, I felt for him, stumbling yet again.
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Not all can be athletic. But poor Rodney! Did they have to choose THAT word? Took me forever to spell it correctly (and it still looks wrong!)
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It is a vexing word for sure. Having made sure I misspelled it in Rodney’s quote, I actually am doing better at spelling it, but it still gives me pause.
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Maybe this is what you needed! And you did it well. 😊
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I can spell it now. Still don’t have much of it.
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Hahaha! So you say (the part of you not having much of it, that is)
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To his defence ,the Hellenic origin word ρυθμός leads straight to rythm…16th century spelling decisions led to what we have.
So as a solace for all the Rodney’s out there, including me: You are staying true to the origin!
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Thank you for bringing some rhyme and reason to rhythm, but for an English reader that is still an unusual string of consonants.
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This is 5-Star BRILLIANT, Genius–I totally loved it, can you tell? 🙂 Every word is perfect, precise–I relate to Rodney, I think I could fall in love with him 🙂
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I think Rodney would be a good partner when he grows up. He will not have an overblown ego, will have empathy. He has an important life skill in that he knows how to lose, yet he perseveres. He will be quite a catch now that you mention it. Thanks!
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My pleasure indeed! Those are great attributes to have, they serve us well in life.
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Surely one of the most-likely-to-misspell-words in the English language.
Probably interesting, (or perhaps not), how different people attempt the word. I, for one, always insist on an ‘n’ at the end.
Like you say, “too #(*&@* many consonants!”
…or, in actuality and far more eloquently, “…word that seemed strangled and constricted by its plethora of consonants“
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I used to do that too, overcompensate with yet another consonant, the silent /n/ at the end. I really have only just begun spelling it correctly and consistently now after trying to ensure a misspell here for this Six.
Spelling rules… could drive an elementary teacher to Six packs.
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Poor Rodney, landed with a dreadful surname too! Weird word though, I deliberately say ‘RHY’ in my head whenever I have to write/type it.
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Yes, and his surname isn’t even phonetic, it’s pronounced Snow dare goost. Poor kid.
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At least that sounds better!
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Excellent and nice left field Six! And bravo Rodney… he tried and tried and eventually found his golden touch. Must admit (even as a drummer) I find myself checking the spelling of ‘ryhthamumn’ from time to time… a tricky word to spell be that! 😎
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Thanks!
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Oh no! Even within his zone, he gets tripped up.
But that’s just one, so he can be forgiven…
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It all depends on how his opponent, Ida Beston, does, it’s down to these two.
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A well articulated character study of the many Rodney’s, D. You know we all knew a Rodney in high school! Bless the boy for his good natured perseverance 🙂
Have to say, I thought for sure he’d get a home run at the spelling bee, lol
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Sometimes a writer has to be cruel for the sake of the story. No happy ending here, but yes, he is a good guy.
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I’ve always been just as sporty as Rodney… and rhythm catches me out every time! With sport, however, you can’t copy and paste! 😀
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Ha! You just revealed a spelling strategy I’ve used before, copy and paste the darn thing.
Thanks for dropping by!
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My pleasure… you still have to look the word up to copy and paste though, so I’m not sure if it saves time, but at least the word’s right! 😀
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We should start a petition to have rith…rhi…rhyum…rithum spelt phonit…phonaticly…foneticly!
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Zactly!
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Ah yes, D, we all have our own bête noire when it comes to spelling, and some of us have a long list!
And the more we think about it, the worse it gets, the letters start looking like someone upset a Scrabble board.
Why, oh why, Y?
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Whryte?
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Every one is good at something. Glad Rodney found his.
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