
Laura Bloomsbury is tending bar at d’Verse, the pub for poets tonight, and informs us that today is National Thesaurus Day. She tells us she has recently purchased a copy of Hart’s “Thesaurus of the Senses” (I recommend it, beautifully written and collated solely into words that resonate with the five senses) and from it comes the first part of today’s prompt:-
1. Write a SOUND POEM which includes AT LEAST ONE from EACH of the FIVE HEARING CATEGORY SELECTIONS below: (reference the hearing words you chose in your post).
- bellow; clink; drone; jingle; quiver;
- clamour; dissonant; rip-roaring; tempestuous; vociferous;
- dulcet: honeyed; poetic; sonorous; tonal;
- blabber; cackle; dribble; gurgle; seethe;
- beseech; chant; drawl; embellish; intone
The second option is to write about that wonderful storehouse of words, the thesaurus. I tried option number one.
Here’s the thing—
(About that full moon?)
a quiet one, honeyed
humming soft because of the snow
(now there’s the problem— snow!)
Not because of how it muffled the moonlight
(because remember
moonlight did not gurgle through the tree branches
didn’t babble like a brook rolling over dissonant rocks
as it might on a clear night
Its light didn’t crackle and jingle as it would on a cold night)
Not to change the subject
not to harp on the problem of snow,
but it’d be good to have the language of the Inuit
to possess a toolkit of nouns
to apply to the different defining snows;
snow-nouns providing context
imparting specifics
instead of flailing with adjectives inadequate
to the task of describing that veiled Wolf Moon that withheld its howl
but suffused snow sodden clouds
with intoned cantillations
and drawled soft copper notes
endlessly echoed by the silent ringing snow.
Fantastic use of all the sounds.
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Thank you. It was a fun challenge.
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Wow!! This is splendid, you’ve give voice to the silent , soft spoken snow. 🙂
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Thank you. That soft spoken snow worked in concert with the moon the other night, quite the duet it was.
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That’s a great scene to watch. 🙂
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You not only tried you succeeded. Not only did you use the sound words given, I could hear the echo and the humming and numerous others.
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Thank you Irene. Yeah it was a pretty raucous snow storm the night of the full moon, and so quiet.
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*applause*
❤
David
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Very well done, Miss D. The topic completely threw me.
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Surprise! It’s snowing, and during the full moon too.
Thank you Robbie!
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I loved reading this delightful poem – and your clever use of sound words “it muffled the moonlight”
then the poem progresses to my favourite part:
“snow-nouns providing context
imparting specifics
instead of flailing with adjectives inadequate
to the task of describing that veiled Wolf Moon that withheld its howl”
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Thank you, I am glad you liked it. It was a fun challenge.
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A beautiful sound-poem, and tribute to that wonderful wolf-moon!
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Thank you. Yep, that moon was worthy of tribute.
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“didn’t babble like a brook rolling over dissonant rocks”
I really love this line! ❤
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Thank you.
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This is truly delightful! What a lovely response to the prompt.
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it.
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You are welcome.
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This is stellar (even if it’s about the moon)… love how you put sounds to the visuals truly masterful synaesthesia…
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Thank you.
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Very well done. Great use of the prompt words.
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Thank you.
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You are welcome!
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Gorgeous, gorgeous write! Wow!! 💝💝
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Thank you. I’m glad it worked.
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