It’s Six Sentence Story time again, prompt word ”deal”. This is what came this week, six sentences, in 52 words. Go to GirlieOntheEdge for the link to more Sixes and be sure to leave one of your own. Anything goes, as long as it’s a Six.
Yes
They have converged at a crossroads and are conversing…
“Really, you’re the real deal? So… like, what is the deal, what do you want from me?”
“I don’t make deals; I want nothing for myself, but do want your actions and words to come from loving kindness.”
“Jesus!”
“Yes.”
ShiftnShake 
Cleverly pithy. Love it.
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Thanks Doug.
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Most excellent, D. How quickly you made me smile 🙂
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Oh good, your smile brightens the day.
I thought it’d be fun to have these two meet at the crossroads, the place where that other guy is often making deals.
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Jesus may want repentance. I like how you brought them together at a crossroads.
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Yeah, the crossroads scene just popped in, but with an unbelievably nice character, not the usual devilish dealer found at crossroads.
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Nicely done, D. 🙂
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Thanks!
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Clever. Love that song. 🙂
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Thanks Norah. Yep, that’s a fine Beatle and from a great album of his.
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It is. 🙂
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cleaverly done. good six.
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Thanks.
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Lets continue the consensus.. excellent Sixifying.
Seems to be a week for brevity, in this case, to good effect.
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Thanks Clark. My gadget woes continue and I have been unable to comment at your place but I should have the fix in hand soon.
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I love this story. 🙂
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Jesus wants complete obedience. I hope it works out for your protagonist. Much as I’ve always been obsessively interested in Beatle George, he’s singing about Hare Krishna so it’s not the same. It’s quite a Fab(heh heh) song though
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Clever meeting place for a disruption to the crossroads trope. I do love that song. We will have to talk about George some day. Next fire.
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You never know who you might meet out on the path.Thanks for walking with me.
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He would be worth going out of my way to meet at a crossroads, or anywhere.
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A lot said in a handful of words. I like it!
My Six!
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Thanks.
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A good crossroads meeting. Can’t argue with the sentiment: “actions and words to come from loving kindness.”
George was such a gentle and full of love Beatle and solo artist. Last words: Love one another.
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