
This introduction will serve as my Six Sentences this week, as I am storied out. Trust me, it would be a disservice for me to force myself to write and then force that gibberish on you, dear reader. So after these six sentences you can read on or not— the quota having been met, you are under no obligation to read more, but there are extra servings. Actually I am serving leftovers, a remake of a November 2019 post where I followed our own Sixer Lisa Tomey to LivingPoetry because I was intrigued by the prompt to show gratitude to another poet. I immediately thought of Robert Service, whose poetry I’ve known and related to since a youngster fortunate to have crossed his path if not in time, then in place, and so first I present one of his poems (not The Cremation of Sam McGee) and then one of mine in humble imitation. As always, thank you to hostess extraordinaire Denise for the weekly serving of prompt.
The Amateur Poet, by Robert Service
You see that sheaf of slender books
Upon the topmost shelf,
At which no browser ever looks,
Because they’re by . . . myself;
They’re neatly bound in navy blue,
But no one ever heeds;
Their print is clear and candid too,
Yet no one ever reads.
Poor wistful books! How much they cost
To me in time and gold!
I count them now as labour lost,
For none I ever sold;
No copy could I give away,
For all my friends would shrink,
And look at me as if to say:
“What waste of printer’s ink!”
And as I gaze at them on high,
Although my eyes are sad,
I cannot help but breathe a sigh
To think what joy I had –
What ecstasy as I would seek
To make my rhyme come right,
And find at last the phrase unique
Flash fulgent in my sight.
Maybe that rapture was my gain
Far more than cheap success;
So I’ll forget my striving vain,
And blot out bitterness.
Oh records of my radiant youth,
No broken heart I’ll rue,
For all my best of love and truth
Is there, alive in you.
Thank You Robert Service by D. Avery
Robert Service, Yukon poet,
You’re read, please rest assured!
Even doubt, you dare here show it,
Yet raised me on your words;
I’ve walked the land that you once tread
You inspired me, you know;
Your poems, first I ever read,
Your shared words like sourdough.
You grounded me with your meter,
Gave wings to me with rhyme;
Gave me poetry! What sweeter?
Gave courage to write mine;
Your ballads inspired children’s play,
When young I lived up north;
Further reading, you’d more to say!
I learned a poet’s force.
You wrote of war, you wrote of love,
Wrote life, great and tragic;
You brought to Earth the stars above,
Wakened me to magic;
Sometimes still, when I take up pen
It’s you who shows the trail,
Leads on, into the wild again
Courting heaven and hell.
From you I learned of garrets bare
of mining phrase and rhyme
panning for all that sparkles there
rich treasures writ sublime;
Upon my shelves your books still stand
Precious alchemic gold
When reading you I’m young again
Imagination bold.
As always a warm welcome, Ms. Avery, and thank you. Love your Six.
You do us a “service” sharing not only Mr. Service’s poetry but your own 😀
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Thank you for your kind words and indulgence. I have stretched the rules before, but this seemed like maybe going too far and I almost didn’t. But then I did. And the good news is that it prompted me to revise and add to the original poem so thank you for that prompt too.
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I have not heard of Robert Service, Ms D. Thanks for the introduction. I like your poem very much. I think we all have our secret spring of inspiration that comes from the words of another. For me, it was L.M. Montgomery.
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He was the bard of the Yukon, much of his poetry about the 1899 gold rush. When I was a young child I lived and traveled in that area, heard his poetry, read it, saw the very places he wrote about and even the cabin he wrote in. His poems resonated with me and echo still.
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That is wonderful.
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Love what you did there, D. The poems are splendid too!
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Thank you.
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This six made a big impression on me. Thank you! Lovely.
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Thank you. Are you a Robert Service fan? He is best known for the Yukon ballads, Dan McGrew, etc, so I was pleased to find this poem that shows his vulnerability as a writer.
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I am a brand new fan Thanks!
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The greatest service is that which inspires
Gratitude given can light many fires.
Well done, D.
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Well done yourself. I see what you did there.
And thank you.
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Greate job, quite the six!
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Six plus, but who’s counting?
Thank you.
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You make them words line up the way few might foresee, but all who read can appreciate.
‘cellent Six, yo
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Thank you. I kind of cheated, but… I’m in!
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Wonderful, top to bottom, and yes, i read it all.
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Thank you! I appreciate that you did and your kind words.
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This is a 6-STAR Fabulous post–Bravo!!!!
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Thank you very much.
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You’re very welcome.
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Thank you so much for your introduction to Robert Service D. I was meant to read that poem today. 😊
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Thank you for sharing that. It makes me feel better about posting. Glad if this helped!
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What an excellent tribute! You’ve got quite the poet chops.
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Thank you. Whenever I first wrote it was poetry. I have two self-published books of poetry, each thematic.
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Nice 🙂
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I had to stop writing for a bit as forcing it wasnt working. This was totally worth the read. Awesome poem but even the explanatory intro.
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I’m glad you’re back and totally get that you took a break. As bold a decision as putting pen to paper. I’ve been on the edge of giving it a rest but with the prompt word service and the poet Service and this particular poem of his went ahead with this rehash revision. I am gratified by your comment. Thank you.
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I love that he said: “Maybe that rapture was my gain / Far more than cheap success / So I’ll forget my striving vain / And blot out bitterness.”
And that you said: “You grounded me with your meter / Gave wings to me with rhyme / Gave me poetry! What sweeter? / Gave courage to write mine.”
A good celebration of another poet there, and their inspiration. Just looked him up and read some of his verse, plus he had some fiction published and even an MGM film adaptation. He reminds me a little of WH Davies, a poet who has resonated with me since my teens.
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I was very young when first I heard Service’s verse. I still remember this (based on The Shooting of Dan McGrew) from our play at that time: The lights went out/ a shot was heard/ A man was hit by a flying turd.
Then we’d fling mud at one another.
But inspired by a local poet!
I was delighted by that original prompt and the opportunity to pay homage to my first (Besides Dr. Seuss)
poet. Service’s meter was grounding because we were in the same place. Having returned East Robert Frost also resonates deeply; but you never forget your first.
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Always enjoyed the rhyming of Dr. Seuss, and remember loaning out many of his books as a youngster from the local library.
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I skipped your six at first, thinking it mere introduction. Then read the next and was about to chastise you when I thought I’d better read the introduction, and then it all made sense. What a great poem by Service. I can see why you were so influenced by his writing. Maybe I need to read more of it. It was lovely to read of his influence upon your own journey into poetry, which I have read, admired and often been challenged to think deeply by. A satisfying post with much to ponder. Thank you.
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