
That’s right, avocado toast. That’s the November 12 2020, prompt from Carrot Ranch this week, to: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes avocado toast. How can this be a story or a prop to a story? Use your senses and imagination. Go where the prompt leads! Here’s my 99 words of fiction. Click over to the Ranch to leave a story of your own, to read others, or to read the post that led to this prompt.
Stuck by D. Avery
In the beginning we both adored avocado toast for breakfast. Together we peeled and pitted. We ate avocado toast out of each other’s hands.
In the end of the beginning I suggested other breakfast foods, reminisced about eggs. Oatmeal even, with raisins. Surely an avocado aficionado would also appreciate raisins and oats. But you insisted on only, always, avocado on toast.
In the beginning of the end I slumped at the counter slurping oatmeal while you crunched overdone toast smeared with over-ripe avocado.
In the end I let you rush to that meeting with avocado stuck in your mustache.
Love it. Bitter-sweet perfection.
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Thank you. This one came out of nowhere.
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The best place, IMHO. 🙂
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Avocado toast – who would have thought it could the life of a relationship? You, obviously. Well done.
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Life and death through overkill. Guess she wasn’t ready for same old same old every single day. Thanks, Norah.
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It can get a bit boring.
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So much could happen between the beginning and ending but you nailed the high spots.
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