CRLC Challenge; Mice

square-template12Yikes, I almost didn’t make it for the latest Carrot Ranch Literary Community’s weekly flash fiction challenge, but Ilene Higginbottom insisted (finally) on the following. The prompt was to write a story of mice, in 99 words, no more no  less.

Caught Out  by D. Avery

“I’ve always been handy at catching them, but I end up feeling bad for them. They can be so cute.”

“Hi girls.” Though late in joining Ilene and Kristof, Marge jumped right into the conversation. “You can’t feel bad for them Ilene. They’re dirty, they get all through your stuff… there’s no living with them.”

Ilene’s brows went up, but she agreed with Marge. “Yes, I have definitely found that it is easier to live without them than learning to live with them.”

“Don’t be soft, Ilene. You have to kill them.”

“Marge, we’re talking about men, not mice.”

5 thoughts on “CRLC Challenge; Mice

    • Nobody wants to kill any of the men. Installment? I never know what’s coming or in what sequence. I do know this snippet is part of a larger scene that I need to play with but not today. Too much going on. I have, in addition to a man, mice in the house, a skunk outside the house and a racoon running interference for said skunk and I have to go to work harvesting hemp, which smells like skunk.

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