It’s only six sentences.
But sometimes inspiration gasps for breath, ideas hunch unrecognizable at dark edges.
Still, the cloud cloaked mountain hunches over the lake.
The hunched heron keeps a hungry eye at the water, ready.
The writer hunches over the keyboard waiting, wanting.
Still.
The word from Denise at GirlieontheEdge this week is “hunch”, but I have a hunch you figured that out from my Six Sentences. No story, I am not as proficient as that blue heron is. I have been finding it harder to write now that I have more time to do it. I’m not sure what I do all day, but it takes all my time. I do want to take some time now to thank Denise and the Six Sentence Story community for being such a supportive and encouraging group.
Last February Denise gave us “plant” and I apologized for a somewhat sketchy offering then too. But I have declared that my blog is not just a display case, it is also a workbench. I am glad to have put the unfinished plant sketch out for you because of the feedback it received. I might have left it be, but was encouraged by the Sixers to keep working with it. I did and in it’s expanded and more polished form will be published Saturday at The Hopper Environmental Lit Magazine.
I’m thrilled they were interested in that piece, and I am appreciative of its origins here as a Six Sentence Story offering. Thank you!
It doesn’t take a lot of sentences, or words, for that matter, to say what’s on our mind. I have a hunch all it takes sometimes is a little push from a prompt.
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Yup.
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v cool on your getting your work published
I agree with the sentiment that this forum is fun writing but it is also very beneficial practice, ’cause, like when it comes to art, especially the rhetorical variety, ‘there ain’t no such thing as too much practice.’
enjoyable Six
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Yes, beneficial and a fun place to practice and play.
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I have a hunch you’re correct on all counts.
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Could be.
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Well done, this is so true.
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Yes. Thank you.
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I totally agree that “sometimes inspiration gasps for breath,” and yet you managed to add one more SSS. Well done and simply put.
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It’s lean this week, but I couldn’t bear not playing again.
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Good! I like when you come over to play 😀
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Me too!
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I’m not sure what I do all day but it takes all my time…oh that is perfect. Yes.
I like the repetition in your story. We are all going in circles now. (K)
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I am incredibly fortunate that I circle in a beautiful place. I guess much of my time is spent watching that mountain, that heron. They keep me busy.
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It’s 5 pm and honestly aside from a few phone calls and cooking a big lunch I don’t know where the day went.
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Cool!
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I like the brevity and the various uses of “hunch”.
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Great six, you aways do such a great job.
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Back at ya!
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“It’s only six sentences”. I know!!!! LOL
More times than not lately, that’s been my challenge – where the he double l are the flowy, inspired, creative words 🙂
Nicely done, btw
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Thank you. And thanks for casting that prompt out every week, regardless of what happens on the other end of the line.
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Gotta keep plugging away D. I hear you on not being inspired 24/7…….especially in the Summer when it’s the time to be outside. You have inspired me as I never thought of taking a SSS and enlarging it to fit a broader canvass. I may just go back over my stories and see if I can be inspired to write more. Looking forward to reading your expanded plant story. Love your idea of the blog as a workbench. So true.
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Glad to have inspired you. The story is now live at http://www.hoppermag.org/trip-to-town .
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