Reading, the men disappeared into embraces remembered or imagined.
The Carrot Ranch February 13, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes a sugar report. Use its original meaning of a letter from a sweetheart to a soldier, or invent a new use for it. Go where the prompt leads!
Mail Drop
“She didn’t forget you this week, Dougie.”
The lieutenant handed out the mail, watched as the steamy jungle faded and the men disappeared into familiar kitchens, old neighborhoods, into embraces remembered or imagined.
Then his radio man was at his side. He didn’t need to tell his men; they were folding their letters, tucking them into their breast pockets, some kissing them before putting them in the band of their helmets. The jungle was back in full focus.
“Time to draw straws.”
“Don’t bother Lieu. I’ll go.” Dougie took point, his crumpled letter left behind in an MRE can.
Those poor guys. I always feel bad for those going into battle. Great take on this week’s prompt.
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Thank you Susan. I imagine letters from home must be very powerful.
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Wonderful take on the prompt.
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Thanks. This one came pretty quickly this week.
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Heartbreaker!
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Thanks.
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A poignant moment caught with what feels like extreme realism
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Thanks. I think 99 words was just right for this scene.
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Nothing wasted, and yet everything covered 🙂
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It might be fiction but it’s a true story. Well told.
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Slammed me right in the gut!
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I’ll take that as a compliment. I appreciate you coming by and taking the hit.
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Sad. As if war wasn’t bad enough, getting a letter like that would really cut a bloke to the heart.
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Yep. So he served his buddies.
Thanks Norah. I know you’re busy.
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Aren’t we all, D. 🙂
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This is a brilliant story of heartbreak.
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Thank you. The prompt worked pretty well for me this week.
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Oh this is so poignant, sad and real too. ❤
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Thank you. This came almost as is immediately upon reading Charli’s post.
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