Perpetual Suspension
How any of it got there was a mystery; nobody ever noticed it come in and certainly nobody saw any of it leave, but somehow it accrued, the yard a mass of arrested motion, a cluttered place where all manner of metal and wheeled machines had become mired and still.
In the front, right up tight to the house, a wooden boat on stands shaded the boat trailer beside it, the trailer stacked with pipes and metal rods and ductwork; a car with stiff, cracked tires and an expired plate was corralled in the driveway by a troop of rusting washers and dryers, the truck he drove having to be parked along the street, but even there seeming in some danger of being absorbed into the mushrooming still life of the quarter acre lot.
There was a narrow path winding through the accumulations by which he could circumnavigate the small house that was an atoll in a sea of overgrown shrubs and reefs of hulking metal; a ’76 Ford pickup truck, a lilac bush clawing its way through the bed, blocked entry to the back porch, which itself was bursting from floor to ceiling with boxes and old appliances. The engine block to this truck had been hanging by chains from a wooden tripod for years, and though he sometimes gave it a reassuring nod and a grunt, it came no nearer the open hood of its truck, but remained in perpetual suspension.
When one evening he was late for dinner, yet his truck parked in its usual spot on the street, a quick circuit of the property revealed that he had perhaps been inspecting that engine block, but maybe should have inspected the wooden legs of the tripod first, for he was found crushed dead where the whole thing had collapsed on him.
The first things to go were the washers and dryers, right into the dumpster that his wife had delivered and placed in the driveway quite soon after the funeral.
Well, I’m ready for Six Sentence Stories this week. Denise at GirlieOntheEdge says the word is “circuit”. The linkup won’t be open until Wednesday but there you go. When you ready your story for participation, just write six sentences, no more, no less. (Though you might notice more semi-colons than usual)
It’s Time! You can link up HERE.
That is such a realistic scenario, I have seen this place, seen it many times, for I swear one village in five has such a metal-desert.
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Yes, it was easy to describe for its familiarity. There’s more but with only six sentences….
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Such restrictions held foster creativity.
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Agreed!
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Er… methinks I made a typo here… help foster… 🙂
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Excellent telling. I think we all know of this [lace. but I have never met the person who owned up to living there till today….
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Wait a minute… you don’t think that… This is not a memoir, not a BOTS! But I have seen that yard or some like it. I find them fascinating.
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The way you’ve structured the sentences really adds to the sense of over-accumulation. (K)
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That is a very cool observation. It wasn’t quite intentional, as I was trying to pack a lot in to the six sentence limit, but yeah, a parallel at play. Thanks!
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What a circuitous place to go with the prompt…
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And yet it’s directly where the prompt led. Thank you for coming by. This feels New England to me. Are there such yards in Utah?
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I’m sure you’d find yards like this anywhere, though probably in more rural areas. I helped a hoarding relative clear a bunch of his stuff once; the city was fining him if he didn’t clean up.
I think the the only difference is you’d be less likely to find a boat or boat trailer.
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You should always have a boat in the yard. Gotta be ready for anything. They are good as housing in a pinch too.
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😀 Noted.
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What a word picture you created. I couldn’t help thinking that some of the “pickers” might find the accumulation of stuff quite fascinating. His wife has the right idea with getting a dumpster on the site right away.
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The wife will have no time to grieve, she has a lot to do.
I am glad if you enjoyed picking this word picture. I appreciate your words.
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Like the others, have been to/driven past such a property.
Liked the tease of a Rube Goldberg…. (whats the cool word…) denouement. lol
(Loved the idea of the trailer still next to the boat on blocks, who has time anymore, anyway?)
“…the yard a mass of arrested motion.” Slow camera pan out.
Fun Six
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Thank you for your flattering and entertaining comments. The phrase “mass of arrested motion” and the image of the yard were hankering for a story and by gosh I did get “circuit” in there.
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There was a place like this just outside the town limits where I grew UP. This was very easy to visualize and identify with.
Good six…as always….
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Yes, I know that place, but I especially love the ones within the town limits.
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Today somebody complained about a rusted metal tod lying on the driveway, in a residents’ group. Guess the alarm has been raised well in time.
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Right? you want to be tolerant and forgiving, but it starts with a rusty tod and next thing you know…
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Holy smokes, what an ending! The part about him being crushed! Easy to visualize this property as you described it quite perfectly. I could/can never understand how anyone can comfortably live under those circumstances. Talk about claustrophobia!
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Ha! Thank you for your comment. Now I am going to pretend that the being crushed by his own hoarded possessions was an intentional metaphorical message. Clearly he couldn’t live under those circumstances.
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And just like that, his dreams of getting to it all “someday” crumble.
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Sad, but true. But I’m thinking the wife is now going to realize a dream or two.
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So many messages in this abundantly rich six about the perils of a hoard of unfortunate circumstances. How could anything possibly go wrong…
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It is unfortunate. That ’76 Ford was going to get worked on finally and then the legs gave out.
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Like the others I too have driven by, gratefully never had to live near such a hoard. Your description was superb….the hoard finally is in charge of the hoarder. Felt like your works took me right inside.
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I’m glad if you enjoyed this. I enjoyed putting this one together from the scraps of memories and sightings I had piled around.
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