Something new from d’Verse! Prosery, 144 words of prose but with a lifted line from a poem within, in this case, from Robert Frost’s Aquainted With the Night: “when far away an interrupted cry” .
It seems decades ago, when being a provider still meant commuting, late nights at the office, cut throat competition at the conference table.
The bottom fell out and the waters rose. Now I stay always close to my family, their failed provider, but still their protector, on constant vigil, for the want and despair of this tarp and cardboard settlement has made everyone dangerous, capable of acts they never imagined before losing everything.
My wife and child weep from fear and hunger. I know what I have to do. There are still those with plenty, in the barricaded neighborhoods. I will have to go there and beg. Failing that, I will steal.
Determined provider, I’m almost there, the settlement behind me, when far away an interrupted cry turns me around. I run back in terror of what I might find. What stopped her cry?
chilling and unfortunately all too real…
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Coming soon, to a planet near you. I pray not, but as they say, this is where the prompt led. Dystopia.
Thank you for coming by for a read.
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A great dystopian piece. We all seem to have a bleak outlook of the future.
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Oh, it’s just fiction… right?
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Shiversome. Leaves my mind racing to construct the most likely (or unlikely) scene
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I’ll never continue this flash. I scared myself as it is.
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Beautiful, love it 🙂
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Each one of us, if not there now, is only a few steps from it. Most are ignorant of, or purposely blind to, it.
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Yep.
Thanks for coming by while you can.
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You are welcome.
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Powerful writing, D. Such a harsh situation – a reality for far too many.
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Thank you for the compliment. Sorry for the reality.
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Unfortunately, the reality is not your fault. Otherwise, I’d just ask you to fix it.
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Many, many are there. It isn’t just fiction. The truth teaches humility and how fragile and precarious a life we all live.
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You speak the truth. Thank you fro coming by.
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Lovely! I found it very moving.
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Wow, thank you. That is, I’m going to take this as a compliment.
Some were shaken. So I am a mover and shaker?
Seriously, thanks, I appreciate your comments.
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This is happening in many places already…. and it might happening to us as well.
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Yes. Agreed.
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Suspense, terror, in this engaging tale. It held me D!
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Thanks. It was an engaging prompt.
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I wonder what dangers lurk in this dystopian neighborhood Well done!
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I imagine all dangers imaginable lurk, but most immediately, water, food, shelter.
Thank you for your comments.
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So sad in the ending. I feel for the determined provider’s family. Good one.
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Thanks. Yeah, and him too, now a failed protector.
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