Rising
eggs sawed open from inside
shoots shouldering through the soil
emerging from the darkness
rising requires work
curled buds unfurling
pages unfold; leaves
proclaim to know the secrets
kept by dormant roots
darkness imagines colors
mysteries made visible
striving to the light
rooted, rising
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Merrill is pulling the pints at d’Verse Pub today, and entreats us to, “Arise, dVerse Poets! Join in the quadrille fun: Write a poem, of any style in 44 words, not including the title. Include the word or derivative of the word, ‘rise’.”
I had already written lines six through ten as a tanka so kept going with lines of 7 or 5 syllables, ending with four syllables for the Quadrille word count. It’s called haiquadrikinda. (Kidding; it’s called recycling and repurposing)
Gorgeous images.The perspective was unique, from the seed, the inside of a bud, breaking through soil and the hope of “darkness imagines color”….oh how I loved this.
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Thank you. These things of spring are said to just appear, as if all for us. Such work and striving behind the scenes, though.
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Delightful description of spring emerging, err rising!
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Thanks.
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A fabulous poem.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful images. I especially like “shoots shouldering through the soil”. Nice one.
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Thank you, Norah.
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Good observation: “rising requires work” Once rooted we can rise.
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It’s all about the roots.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.
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Wow, thanks, Reena.
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You are welcome!
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A beautiful description of spring emerging. We so seldom think of the work involved or energy expended by the plants and animals around us to create the beauty we see all around us.
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Hmm. Maybe it’s not about us. But we sure are lucky to witness.
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What? Now we can plant eggs? Forgive me for having a bit of fun. Your poem is lovely, and bespeaks the miracle of seed and soil.
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No worries. Heck, I had fun once. The egg maybe doesn’t belong, but it kept springing to mind.
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I can almost feel the pain of growing in this wonderful poem of spring
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Every season has its tribulations.
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This touches on different strengths, both rooted and rising as attributes. Well done.
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Gotta have roots to rise well.
Thanks.
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I specially love this part: rising requires work. I look forward to the rising spring season.
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As we all come out of the dark. It’s good work worth doing.
Thank you for your words.
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I love your images in this one… I can see it happening in real time!
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Thanks!
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