Destiny’s Fate
Marlie was both pleased and annoyed by the buzzing presence of her visiting grandparents, of being the center of attention and of getting gifts she didn’t really like. Even her mother said something about this latest one, letting her granma know that she didn’t think she’d ever play with a Barbie doll.
“Of course, she will, what little girl wouldn’t, and it’s not a Barbie, her name is Destiny Doll; she can do anything.”
Taking Destiny outside, Marlie went to her trucks that were parked at the mound of dirt at the end of the backyard, thinking Destiny might fit in the big Tonka dumper, but Destiny got caught, it was a terrible accident, and scraped her leg pretty good when Marlie rescued her, heroically pulling her from the vehicle.
After Marlie used grass shears to cut the doll’s big hair short so it wouldn’t get dirty and tangled, Destiny became a spelunker, exploring a network of caves that Marlie created in the mound of dirt, but unfortunately tragedy struck in the form of an earthquake and subsequent landslide.
Trapped beneath the rubble, Destiny could not hear the summons to lunch, could not see brave Marlie running across the expansive fields of the small backyard, running to the cursed castle where the intrepid girl would tempt fate once more.
It’s story time, Six Sentences at a time. The prompt word is “destiny“. The prompter is Denise of GirlieOnTheEdge. The time is now to write a Six Sentence Story. Get your ink to the link.
Excellent!! and what a fun visual!!
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Thanks! I wasn’t sure where this one was headed, then the little girl took over.
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She did a great job! Those are the best kind.
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She made her doll an action figure toy, good for her!
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She is an action figure herself. I don’t think this kind of playing with dolls is what Granma had in mind.
Thanks for coming by.
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Cute six. Good imagination – you and the little one!
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Thanks!
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from your reply above: “… then the little girl took over.”
To me, not only is that the fun part of writing, it’s also a huge relief… when the characters start to tell you, the writer, the story.
cool
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Yep! It’s just six sentences… let Her rip.
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I smiled at Marlie bringing Destiny out to her Tonka truck. That would be me, lol. I never owned a Barbie, never played with dolls but I loved the Matchbox cars 😀
Fun 6!
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Yeah. Granma needs to accept what Destiny endured.
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Destiny is making her own destiny! And so is Marlie. Great six.
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Thanks! It was fun to follow Marlie’s lead.
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We always had our Barbies act out stories involving magic and fairies. You work with what you’ve got and who you are! 🙂
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Marlie and Destiny are destined for adventures. What a great pair!
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I’m not so sure Destiny has a bright future, but Marlie does. She was in a couple of Carrot Ranch flashes, totally unrelated and unplanned- at the time. Looks like she’s getting herself together this weekend. I think she might be your kind of kid.
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She’s definitely my sort of kid. One of the first things I did with my bride doll (Barbie wasn’t born in my day) was straighten her hair. Then I cut it off! Hmm. How destructive was that!
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Sounds like the type of kid who’d play with matches and run with scissors.
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Well, I’m not saying anything that could be held against me. 🙂
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Aww, Avery, well done.
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Thanks! Glad you liked it. She’s a fun character, this girl.
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Sure, she is. 😀
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