Once again I address two prompts with one flash.
At Carrot Ranch the September 6, 2018 99 word challenge is to write about an epic workplace, real or imagined. GirlieOnTheEdge would have us write a Six Sentence Story prompted by the word “difference”. Here’s the mashed flash.
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One woman told about her daughter the pilot- she mentioned three children that were pilots and one that worked for NASA.
A man bragged about his son the writer- she enumerated her journalists, published authors, and artists.
She shared her pride for her children that served in the military, fire, rescue, and police forces, beamed about those that had become nurses and doctors, spoke warmly of the children that stayed close to home and were good citizens.
Finally someone cried foul.
“You can’t possibly have so many children!”
“As a teacher I’ve made a difference for hundreds of children.”
I LOVE this! I LIVE this as I’m a teacher and my pupils really are my kids too!!!
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This was written for you and all your children!
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😍😍😍 I absolutely loved it!
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Oh yeah! Great
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If any group of people have bragging rights, its teachers.
Nice job 🙂
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I knew you were writing about a teacher. Who else? Love it.
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I knew you’d know. Ok, I wrote it for you! And all your children, including Marnie.
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Awh! Thank you. That’s so sweet. I thought it was about you! You and me both, then. 🙂
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A lovely piece. A great teacher certainly has an impact on her students.
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Thank you. Yes, it is important work, teaching.
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Ha! Great ending and what an awesome tribute to teachers. Thanks for the smile!
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Thanks for the kindly visit.
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Good work! A+!
(lol… you see, the teacher thing, at the end… comedy writing surely is hard work!)
Nicely engaging Six Carrot Story!
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Thank you kind Sirs. (Yikes, Six Carrot Story? Might become a thing…)
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Even though I have not been a professional teacher for a very long time… I would like to think I made a difference for some of the young minds I came in contact with. Then of course one becomes a parent and a grandparent and continues in several professions at once. 😉
Very nice honorarium for all who teach anything anywhere – including you!
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I am sure that you had and continue to have a positive impact on all the youngsters you work with- including me!
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I guess I hadn’t thought about adult interactions and the encouragement that we all gift to each other. Especially at the Ranch 🙂
Thank you for lifting my spirits and making me smile.
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Amn’t I a youngster?!
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I may be an ol’ fart, but I’m youn’ at heart too!
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Nice angle. A good teacher can take credit for successful students. All has come out of her work in an Epic workplace.
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Thanks.
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Most writers are unemployed. But they work at their own time and speed. They don’t have to rush through peak hour traffic.
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D. this flash is an epic story of the power of teachers to inspire so many children. Bragging rights awarded!
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