This was a sketchy prompt from Carrot Ranch for me this week. (June 28, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that is a sketch or about a sketch. Go where the prompt leads you to scribble.) I wondered if I was ever going to come up with a response. So I decided to keep it simple and tried to sketch one of my neighbors, a very large snapping turtle. That got the ink flowing. Next I riffed off of Charli’s post, in which she describes sketching as a literary artist. Finally, I sketched a scene that was led to my head by the prompt. I hope you enjoy and I encourage you to read at the Ranch.
A Neighbor
We’ve met before on this lake. She’s a big one. Today she’s lazing just underneath the surface, her mossy plated shell a hub for four bumpy, clawed legs that dangle beneath her, for the spiny leathery tail ruddered behind, for her massive craggy beady-eyed beak-tipped head. She dives then comes back to the surface, sticking her snout out of the water, taking air in through flared nostrils. Seeing me, she swims silently away. I feel she’s ancient, wonder at her long life, but cannot begin to say what she thinks or feels. Out of respect I don’t even try.
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The Sketch Artist
“Okay, let’s begin”, Officer Mills said, sketch pad in hand.
“He had a round face, with brown eyes.”
“No, describe him. Did he harbor a storm in his eyes? Did his past linger at the edges of his unspoken thoughts?”
“Umm, he was tall… about six foot four.”
“Six foot four?! How tall was he? We need a sketch. Was he simply tall like a tree, or did he walk in that head hunched way that tall people do, ducking through doorways, folding into cars?”
“I don’t know! You’re just writing words! Where’s the sketch artist?”
“Right here, literally.”
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Heaven Knows
“Didn’t think it’d be like this. I always heard it was more like a movie, you know, your life replayed for you.”
“I was surprised too. A pile of sketches they hand you. Your own sketches.”
“So, you have to go back too?”
“Ha, you bet I do. Any of us with these skinny little sketchbooks have to retrain and go back for another lifetime. Next time, I’m going to make more time for sketching. For etching deeds and memories.”
“Yeah, they say if you get here with good stories to tell you’re all set.”
“Heaven knows, that’s life.”
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I enjoyed al three sketches. Life does indeed fill our sketch books with material to write down. Well said.
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Thank you. I appreciate you coming by.
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Good stories (as always). So many of us wrote about sketch artists. 🙂
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Thank you. I am behind in my reading but looking forward to the other sketches.Thanks for coming by.
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That is one of the most compelling takes on a prompt that I’ve read, seen and imagined. Brilliant
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You have to tell me… which one?
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All of them though Officer Mills was special
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Isn’t she just. Not sketchy at all, but what an artist. I am proud to be able to show Shorty in my meager sketches.
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Ha. Shorty Mills. Sounds like the unlikely hero of a WW2 plan to kidnap Rommel
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All three are very good, but the snapping turtle is my favorite. I knew exactly what you were describing without reading your introduction.
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Thank you. She is a neighbor and I try to have coffee with her every morning.
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Keep your sketching pencil at the ready… These are all tall tales with just the right vision.
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Not so tall, these ones. But yes, sketchy. All the more remarkable because the vision is failing and held precariously up by trifocals.
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I’ve got bifocals… Age is just a number though…
Keep thinking and keep drawing breath, words, and sketchin’.
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Wow. These are awesome. The first is beautiful and the last two were great twists of perception. Love them.
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Thank you. Snapping turtles aren’t generally known for their beauty, but it really is all in how you look at them. Meeting up with her did wonders for my outlook that day and got me back on track.
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Every creature has perfectly evolved to thrive on this planet. Pretty amazing. We all belong. ❤
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Fine sketching for A Kidd. Your neighborhood sketch pulls me to a place where our desire to want to know and control is tempered by observing and allowing that to be enough. I laughed at Officer Mills. Literally an excellent sketch — go for the concrete details that shape the curves of a story. Great concept of getting into heaven! I’m also happy to see your tail boldly displayed. 🙂
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Thanks Boss. A few years ago I would have at the least stuck a stick out to get her snapping, might even have caught her for dinner. Now we are just two old ones on the same lake, sharing a moment, paddling along.
Glad you enjoyed my other riffs.
Yep, my tail is boldly displayed as I tell tales.
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I’m sure your turtle neighbor appreciates your shift in perspective!
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