Pining Crane

Brooklyn_Museum_-_Tortoise_Has_New_Year's_Dream_of_Crane_and_Pine_-_Kôbun_Yoshimura.jpgKôbun Yoshimura (Japanese, 1793-1863). Tortoise Has New Year’s Dream of Crane and Pine, 1854.

Pining Crane

Turtle dreamt of journeying. With sure steps Turtle began trudging along an uncertain path. Borne of Earth, yet bearing thirteen moons full upon her back, Turtle bore her journey with patience and faith.

After many cycles of many moons, Turtle was far from where her journey had begun. In the shelter of wise Pine, Turtle curled up to rest. Then Turtle awakened, transformed, as if again emerging from a shell.

As Crane, Turtle stretched feathered wings, stood tall upon two long legs, danced a dance of timelessness; as Crane, flew high over Pine, lucidly, all past illusions clearly visible.



My 99 words for the Carrot Ranch May 10, 2018, prompt: write a story defining “the charisma of cranes.” For centuries, cranes have inspired art and philosophy. You can write a crane story or create something new out of the phrase. Go where the prompt leads.

13 thoughts on “Pining Crane

  1. Pingback: Charisma of Cranes « Carrot Ranch Literary Community

  2. Nice to see you over at Pure Haiku…
    I still haven’t caught up with all the reading at the Ranch.
    It can get overwhelming at times…

    I like this gentle story of reincarnation and transformation.

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      • Just got in from mowing the front lawn between rain storms…(after grocery shopping for the week) so I know how that goes – being busy.

        Never mind this (last) week… today is a new prompt at the ranch… I think I have a mini mash in mind. But it will have to wait until sometime tomorrow. Oy!

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