Low tones softly
spoken almost hummed
hard to hear harder
to ask
to Speak Up play down
fears muttering or mumbling.
Might be mine ear stumbling
on muffled strings
of words that are strummed
words that maybe
sing possibly thrum muted
murmurings of love.
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At dVerse, WhimsyGizmo would have us “Murmur something poetic in exactly 44 words, including some semblance of the word murmur. Get creative if you’d like, and have some fun with it, but please be sure some form the word “murmur” appears in your poem, and that your word count adds up to exactly 44, not including the title”. Click HERE to go there and see more poetry or to give it a try yourself.
LOVE all the “um” of this. A low hum throughout. Wonderful use of sound.
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Thank you. It was a fun prompt. And a fun form, this quadrille.
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So hard to say those words out loud…
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Mmmurmph?
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such music in these sounds
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I liked the sound in these two lines: “fears muttering or mumbling.
Might be mine ear stumbling”
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A rhythm guitar riff of a poem. Loved it.
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Thanks. I don’t do music but was totally riffing with this.
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Loved reading this one aloud!
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That you did is pretty cool. Thanks!
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Murmurings of love… so romantic!!💜💖
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Thanks for coming by.
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