All landscapes and their flora are the story they tell. No matter what has transpired, plants arrive as angels, filling a niche, fulfilling a need. You can study it as pioneering species and plant succession, but better yet as an interdependent community, an ecosystem always striving towards health and wholeness. Farmers and gardeners should follow the lead of nature in their human endeavors. Wes Jackson comes to mind for his work at The Land Institute where he promotes perennial polyculture to make agriculture more sustainable and more ecologically healthy. Plants speak for the soil, which sustains the plants, which sustain the soil, which sustains the plants that also sustain us; we might want to pay attention to the stories a landscape is telling.
That’s a rant that hopefully didn’t send you away from my 99 word flash prompted by Charli Mills at Carrot Ranch this week.
Ground Cover
Though she didn’t know him, she climbed the granite boulder underneath the craggy maple and sat with him looking over the hayfield.
A beautiful quilt he said, the red and orange paintbrush, the blue chicory. She loved how he spoke, but bluntly informed him those were weeds that covered poor soil. Then she blushed; the weeds exposed her family’s poverty, her father’s laziness and ineptitude. This field should be green, not the colors of scars and bruises.
She noted his backpack and tightly rolled sleeping bag. “Don’t go yet,” she instructed him. “I need to get a few things.”
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Carrot Ranch February 8, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes fireweed. You can use it as the plant, a flower, a metaphor or as the name of someone or something. Go where the prompt leads. Burn bright when you write. Respond by February 13, 2018, to be included in the compilation (published February 14). Rules are here. All writers are welcome!
And so their journey begins…. I once watched a documentary that showed how trees speak to each other within a forest. Pretty amazing.
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Yes, that book is on my to be read pile.
Thanks for coming by.
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Everyone’s allowed a rant once in a while – particularly when the message is an important one. Interesting flash. New characters. I agree with his description of a quilt – a wonderful tapestry of colour.
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How new? These two would be Hope’s mother’s parents. Stay tuned.
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I didn’t recognise them. Apologies if I’ve missed their previous episodes. I look forward to getting to know Hope’s grandparents a little better. It might help me understand why her mother doesn’t like to stay too long in one place.
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There’s nothing to recognize, their story has yet to be written. Stay tuned.
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I will! 🙂
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A necessary rant that goes well with your flash, D. I especially like this line: “This field should be green, not the colors of scars and bruises.”
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Thanks Boss.
I bet you know of Wes Jackson. He’s buddies with Wendell Berry, restores prairie in Kansas.
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I’ve heard of the Land Institute. Prairies are amazing systems that we destroyed when we killed the buffalo and plowed the grass. I worked with Dan Halsey in designing permaculture community gardens for my co-op in Minnesota. Such fascinating and wonderful ways we can work in partnership with the land.
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Love the vividness and colour juxtaposed with her backstory. Very very good.
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Thank you. Glad you came by.
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Very good piece of flash fiction.
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Thank you Robbie. I always appreciate your visits.
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Loved the description of the field and it’s colours
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Thanks!
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Glad you included where to start… I was a tad busy last week.
Now I’m off to the next part.
Rants are a good thing when they teach us to look before we leap. 🙂
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