He was a good bicyclist, skillful and considerate, always riding to the right of the white line. He used lights and always wore reflective clothing, making himself visible to drivers.
They say he was a good man, teaching children to ride, fixing their bikes.
His road bike was the green of a sent text message. The truck was gray, they think.
They found his bike tangled on the yellow line. His white helmet had somehow come off, somehow whole and spinning, spinning, on the silent black tar of the highway. They marked the spot with a white ghost bike.
This is my second take for the February 1, 2018, Carrot Ranch prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that features something black and white. It could be a nun in a zebra monster truck, a rigid way of thinking, a bird in a tuxedo — be imaginative and go where the prompt leads. Respond by February 6 , 2018, to be included in the compilation (published February 7). Rules are here. All writers are welcome!
What a tragic story, but you create the picture and the tension well. Too many ghost bikes – too many too young ghosts.
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Thanks. Bicycling has always been a bit of a risk, but cell phone use… just put them down, everyone, shut up and drive.
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Exactly. I don’t understand. Everyone thinks the rules are for everyone else. So frustrating – so much unnecessary loss of life and sadness.
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So much happened in this take. Well done
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Thanks. One white bike says way more than my 99 words.
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This is really good, D. Avery. You made good use of all 99 words. Fantastic!
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Thank you so much. Glad you came by. Ride safe!
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I gave up riding my bicycle a couple of years ago. We don’t have bike lanes where I live and the distracted drivers terrified me. I miss it so much as I loved to ride. I feel safer walking.
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Cell phones do so much to rob us of mindfulness. We are not in the moment when we are on the phone. And it ultimately robs us of many other moments.
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