Again, thank you so much Marcia for sharing your site. You have showcased so many great excerpts this week. It is an honor to be among your featured authors.
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ShiftnShake 
What a powerful poem, D. I love the advice to mold and shape and rearrange the feeling scared. So important. I haven’t started reading these poems yet, but am looking forward to doing so.
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Thank you. I notice this one got changed a bit somehow getting from page to post, but it is essentially the same. I was playing around with the look and feel of the words, putting them together visually, like scared/sacred, dreamer/remade, etc. And of course thinking of positive thinking as I played with words.
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The entire poem reminds me of clay, that we are malleable and full of possibilities and contradictions. As your word play shows, sometimes we can make a large shift by a small rearrangement.
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Wow, cool comment. Clay… no schist, Boss. Cool. Metamorphic/metaphor/euphoric
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Yes, like clay schist. You work schist well, like a word-potter.
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