Again, thank you so much Marcia for sharing your site. You have showcased so many great excerpts this week. It is an honor to be among your featured authors.
Again, thank you so much Marcia for sharing your site. You have showcased so many great excerpts this week. It is an honor to be among your featured authors.
What a powerful poem, D. I love the advice to mold and shape and rearrange the feeling scared. So important. I haven’t started reading these poems yet, but am looking forward to doing so.
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Thank you. I notice this one got changed a bit somehow getting from page to post, but it is essentially the same. I was playing around with the look and feel of the words, putting them together visually, like scared/sacred, dreamer/remade, etc. And of course thinking of positive thinking as I played with words.
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The entire poem reminds me of clay, that we are malleable and full of possibilities and contradictions. As your word play shows, sometimes we can make a large shift by a small rearrangement.
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Wow, cool comment. Clay… no schist, Boss. Cool. Metamorphic/metaphor/euphoric
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Yes, like clay schist. You work schist well, like a word-potter.
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